Hello Today I am going to talk to you about my 100 word count. Every week we get a new prompt. My story was about a dog. This weeks prompt was 'explosive'. In this story I nearly lost my dog. It took me a really long time to write this story. Sorry it kind of hard to read. Thank you for reading my blog post.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, August 13, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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I think if I heard an explosion Riley,I'd be running away from it rather than go closer,but then someone could be hurt so that wouldn't be right.
ReplyDeleteWhat sort of cool stuff did you see?.
I cleaned out my neighbour's cupboards the other day and I found this cool teapot.She told me it was a special teapot that I can't remember the name of.It had 4 spikes coming off it and a little pot that sits underneath it.
Hi Riley,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a bit of humor with the dog. I have a few questions, how many people were in the house? Was it crowded in the house? And what kind cool things were in the house? Bye have a great weekend. -Leo.