I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Wednesday, July 24, 2019
my video
Hi carter its me Riley today we have been macing a video for you I hop. you like it its by me bye this is for my carter love from Riley.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Riley,
ReplyDeleteNice video. I like the way you said why you were thanking him and also I liked the 'bye' at the end.
Did you let your brother know you gave him a shout out?
- Miss Morgan
Hello Riley.
ReplyDeletethat is so sweet that you did a 'shout out' for your brother. I hope he gets to watch this. Just remember that 'Carter' needs a capital letter as it is a persons name.
How old is Carter?Didn't you mention at school that he was having a birthday soon?
Hey Riley,
ReplyDeleteNice video. I like the way you said why you were thanking him and also I liked the 'bye' at the end.
Did you let your brother know you gave him a shout out?