we have been writing about our cartoon.this is my first cartoon.
I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Wednesday, July 24, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Riley,
ReplyDeleteI like your story. Is it that you went for a walk you saw a dog and you said hi. And you went home you did not want the dog to follow you back home then you went to the shop? I dont know but good job looks good. I like your hairstyle you did. Sorry if this is long. -Angel