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Friday, June 21, 2019

My fish

in topic we have been macing a clown fish in the sea here is same facts there ate nearly 30 clown fish.

3 comments:

  1. Hello Riley. I really like the way you have painted your fish. I like that you gave it stripes and made it look like a real clown fish.Maybe next time you could add a little bit more in your description.You wrote 'there are nearly 30 clown fish' and that was all you said.It would be good to say 'where'.

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  2. Hi Riley,
    I really like how you did a clown fish. This looks very impressive. Maybe next time you could put more information on your writing. Is clown fish your favourite fish?

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  3. Hi Riley. I like you clown fish. I like your color of your fish. Mabye next time you could put more information of your fish. Is this your favourite fish?

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