in topic we have been macing a clown fish in the sea here is same facts there ate nearly 30 clown fish.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, June 21, 2019
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Hello Riley. I really like the way you have painted your fish. I like that you gave it stripes and made it look like a real clown fish.Maybe next time you could add a little bit more in your description.You wrote 'there are nearly 30 clown fish' and that was all you said.It would be good to say 'where'.
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ReplyDeleteI really like how you did a clown fish. This looks very impressive. Maybe next time you could put more information on your writing. Is clown fish your favourite fish?
Hi Riley. I like you clown fish. I like your color of your fish. Mabye next time you could put more information of your fish. Is this your favourite fish?
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