Not long a go I did zones my friend. Leo came it was my second time going there. it was hard to ran the track. we had to go through 3 creeks. but I went throw 2. becomes there was a bridge on the first creek. I hope you enjoyed it thank you for reading it.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, July 31, 2020
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Your post gave me a giggle Riley.I like that you used a bridge instead of running through the water.That's smart thinking.
ReplyDeleteWell done for giving the race a go.
Where did you go to do the running?.
Back when I was at school we only had Cross Country.We had to run a long way around a farm.We had to go over tree trunks,through creeks and over paddocks with lots of sheep pats in them.
Hello Riley, I liked you I'd Love to know where you went for cross country. Maybe you should describe a little bit more about the running you did. Did you bring lots of water?
ReplyDeletehey riley i like your blog post and i'm going to check out some more and what place did you come bye
ReplyDeleteHello Riley.
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is really cool. But maybe next time you could read through because some of you sentences did not have capitals letters? I like how much detail you have in this post. Have a good day or night. From Jayden.