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I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, July 24, 2020
Winter Sports
Today I am going to talk about sport today. It is at 1 30 pm. My team is the Rovers. I am versing the St Bernadette school. I am so nervous to do it. We are playing at Kyle park 1. I hope you enjoyed my blog post.
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hi Riley i think your blog post is interesting and next time maybe add more words have you ever played soccer before
ReplyDeleteHello Riley i think you have done an amazing job on this blog post. It has tons of information about winter sport. One thing that you could improve on is you could put a picture of you playing.
ReplyDeleteHi Riley,
ReplyDeleteI kind of like your post about winter sports. Maybe next time you could add a lot more information. Also you could add a picture?
Hello Riley, I think your blog post had a couple of things you needed to work on, but first I am going to tell you the good thing. The good things are is that your punctuation and captial letters were good. But maybe next time you could've put more information and put a photo on. Have a good day or night goodbye.
ReplyDeletehi riley,
ReplyDeletei king of like your post about winter sport maybe next time you could add a picture