In writing we were writing descriptions. I did Disneyland. That is what I wrote about.
Here is a photo and my writing.
Here is a photo and my writing.
We have been doing Art we dan our country for are photo here is my photo.
I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hello Riley.I think I would like to go to Disneyland as long as it was in New Zealand.When you are writing, instead of using 'and' all the time,maybe you could just use a comma.My favourite part of the visit would be to go down the water slide.What ride would you like to go on and why?
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