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Friday, April 12, 2019

RILEY DISNEYLAND DESCRIPTION

In writing we were writing descriptions. I did Disneyland. That is what I wrote about.
Here is a photo and my writing.




We have been doing Art we dan our country for are photo here is my photo.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Riley.I think I would like to go to Disneyland as long as it was in New Zealand.When you are writing, instead of using 'and' all the time,maybe you could just use a comma.My favourite part of the visit would be to go down the water slide.What ride would you like to go on and why?

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