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Friday, September 6, 2019

in writing we have been doing a video and this is my one I hop you like it.


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  1. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2019 at 11:55 PM

    Hi there Riley you did good on your story.But you could have used something more then he and fred next time.It was very Interesting and your full stops were in the right place. And I liked it when at the end when they were happy .Bye have a great day.

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  2. Nan BovairdJuly 28, 2020 at 8:44 PM

    Hi Riley. What a great adventure Fred had. I'm glad he managed to find his friends

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