In room 9 we have been learning about how to make a good comment with Miss Morgan
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Wednesday, May 22, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Riley.Your text is a good size.The different shape text boxes are a good size.You have used the space well and filled up the paper.Maybe next time you could add a better picture to go with your work.I am guessing the picture is meant to be of a phone.Would that be correct?I look forward to hearing from you.
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ReplyDeleteI know you have been working hard on your Diving story.I look forward to reading it when you post it.
Have a super weekend and stay dry.
I will
Deletethanck you mis Cassidy
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